Dream Deep

To all my pals and all my inspirations, to the ones who will someday have novels dedicated to them; to Suz for keeping me going, to Cal for making my ...

Username : 85% ... not the most creative, but you get points for alliteration. ^_^ Custom Title : 95% Avatar : 100% ... I was ever so slightly obsessed with ...

The "Seen It" Thread... . . . This evening, my brother and I took my dad to see The Golden Compass. All the contraversy made us curious, and besides, we ...

Hey, if you're gonna make a post, why not get 50 points out of it? ^_^ It's no problem, Razor - there really isn't very much to say on the ...

Who needs kendo? ...And naturally, no one ought to need kendo with fencing... *choke/gasp* Et tu, Brute?

This really gave me chills, haha. I think the quality of your tone and poetry was at its peak in the opening stanza - as the poem went along, it ...

This was sweet. ^_^ Too often, one ends up reading dark and blood-drenched (hyperbole) poetry listing the infinite number of reasons why mothers are the most atrocious creatures to inhabit ...

The eyes are brilliant, as is the scimitar. I think I mentioned before that the foremost thigh seems greatly out of proportion - something to look at. Other than that, ...

Oy, so modest... live up the compliments, yeah? 'Teh hotness', as dear Wigs said. ;)

7.10 I don't understand the first line, but it makes me laugh anyways. Well, 'da', is yes in Russian. Something a friend wrote to me once, when I told her ...

^_^ Thanks, Kelle.

7.10 ... the first line alone deserves 9.10 ^_^ ... but I support Horace. Traitor.

While I do think that this has some potential, I don't know that you're headed along the right track with the style. It feels rather very unbelievable as it is. ...

This isn't going to a be a very helpful critique, I think, but hopefully an encouraging comment if nothing else. ^_^ I read the previous version a few months ago, ...

Interesting as an opening - the successful prologue is the one which makes the reader curious as to what follows, and at the moment, I'm dying to know what happens ...